This is my writing for the last day of term 2, (Not Teacher Reviewed yet)
Genre: narrative
Story about: Invading a dojo and fighting skilled shadow ninjas
The DoJo Invasion (total words: 1071) (time: 10 minutes)
It was a dark night and the stars were shining bright, i and my crew got ready to do our mission, to invade the DoJo. We got ready with our equipment and got ready to strike at the right moment, I saw a ninja walking on his own supposing that he’s guarding the place. I told my crew to wait, I counted 3..2…1.. and we attacked! I jumped on the ninja and grabbed him but the arms and tied him to the wall but an alarm went off and the shadow ninjas appeared out of nowhere. Turns out that ninja was a dummy to set off alarms, they grabbed their swords and teleported to us, some ran and some teleported. I tried to fight them off as much as possible and my crew, but there were too much so we retreated. The path was blocked by some shadow warriors which are the strong ninjas. They threw this type of bomb that blinded all of us. I was knocked out, I woke up in this room full of katanas and shurikens, I screamed “HELP!” But there was no response. The door creaked and came in “SHADOW KING” he is known to be the fastest, strongest, smartest shadow ninja in the world. No one has defeated him at all the only time he was close to getting defeated was by his own shadow crew but it did not work. I could see his scars under his mask, “Hello, old friend.” He said, I replied with “What?” He took off his mask and revealed his face full of scars and blood. It was my old friend from the DoJo we trained in, “You, killed my sensei!” I said, he didn’t reply. He went up to one of the katanas and looked at it for a while. With no hesitation he grabbed it and threw it right at me, I thought I was a goner but I could see blood dripping on my legs I looked up and saw a katana through one of my shadow members. He turnt around and said “Run..” I jumped and the katana sliced my rope and I ran to the nearest door. I ran through the door and into a pool. I could hear him breathing and walking towards the pool, while he was distracted I jumped out and did an uppercut, I grabbed his sword and stabbed him. It felt like he didn’t feel anything, he put his hands on the sword and pulled it out himself while his hands are sliced and bleeding. I kicked him and dragged him towards the pool. I was gonna throw him in the pool but I was stopped by a bunch of shadow ninjas, they teleported behind me and grabbed by the neck and hands. I was tied to a pole, and got punched multiple times. I was almost knocked out, at a glimpse of an eye I could see the shadow king walking towards me with a hole in his body and a missing arm. I did not know what happened to his arm and body but it seems like he was invincible and some sort of mutant. He grabbed me with one hand and threw me across the floor. I was knocked out, and didn’t know what had happened in the next period of time. The only thing I could remember was the sound of screaming and swords slicing and throwing. I later woke up at the hospital wounded and injured, I noticed that my left arm was missing. I looked to my left and right, nobody, my vision was still blurry. I opened my eyes again and my left arm was back somehow. I got up from my bed and tried to look for someone, there was no one, not even a single person outside. It felt like I was in a different place, I tried to go to a car but when I opened it I woke up in a different place. I was in the DoJo again where I was a child training, I could see the shadow king training, I forgot his name. I tried to warn my sensei about what was going to happen but the only thing it did was bring me to another dimension, I was getting tired so I decided to just, die..It worked i was back to where I was, tied to the pole and almost knocked out. Then my shadow crew came from the top of my enemies and used one of their attacks “SHURIKENS FROM ABOVE” which they throw multiple shurikens from above and attacking their enemies, it had worked I was free from the pole. I got up and grabbed the katana that the shadow king used to kill my sensei with 25 years ago. I went up to the shadow king and said “I’ll kill you with the same katana you killed my sensei with 25 years ago…” I went all out and went super fast towards him and used my best attack “CONSECUTIVE NORMAL STABS” which stabs him 1000 times a second, I was sure he would be dead but he stood still with thousands of holes inside him. He pushed me so hard it completely breaks the sword. I said “Alright, fight me like a man.” I went to punch him while dodging his attacks, it looked like he was getting stronger and stronger every time I punched him, his final attack punched me all the way over the building. I was saved by one of my members, I had had enough of this and wanted to end this once and for all, I called my crew and we all transformed into a “SHADOW GOD” we ran towards the shadow king at the speed of lighting and did a powerful punch that stabs them with thousands of swords. He was knocked back and was against the wall. I had found his weakness to kill him it was to attack him from the back, we split up and surrounded him. My crew started attacking him and so was he. While he was distracted, I grabbed the broken katana he used to kill my sensei with and ran towards him and stabbed him at his weak spot, which kills him. He drops down to the floor, still breathing “Do not kill my sensei..” he was dead now, or so I thought he was…..




